中考英语作文分类及范文释析：新生事物评价（下）

　　3、书面表达。（计10分）

　　假如你叫李平。最近，你就使用电子词典的问题调查了各方面的意见（见下表）。现在，请你根据表格中的信息用英语给某报社编辑写一封信。

　　注意：1.信件须包括写信原由及表格所列内容；2.书信格式正确；3.书写整洁；4.词数在80个左右。

　　生词提示：electronic adj.电子的 explanation（S）n.解释，说明　　发表意见者

　　对使用电子词典的不同意见　　同学 有用，方便，节省查阅时间　　家长 便于携带，多数家庭买得起　　英语教师 对单词的解释太简单，不该使用　　本人 会使我们变懒惰，不该使用

　　Dear Editor，

　　Recently（最近） I made a survey（做调查） about the use of the electronic dictionary.My classmates think that the electronic dictionary is useful，convenient and it can help to save time looking up the words.The parents also think the electronic dictionary is easy to carry and most families can afford it.But my English teacher doesn’t think we should use it，because she/he thinks its explanations for the words are too simple.I suppose the electronic dictionary will make us lazy and we shouldn’t use it.

　　Yours，

　　Li Ping

　　4.看图作文

　　同学们，看到下面的四幅图片及相应的报道后，你感到最担忧的是哪两种情形？请简述你担忧的理由并提出建议或希望。

　　要求：⒈ 从所给素材中任选两种情形进行阐述，不可多选或少选。

　　⒉ 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；

　　⒊ 词数 80 ～ 100。

　　参考词汇： 建议 suggest v. suggestion n. 气体 gas n.

　 污染 pollution n.

　　THE POLLUTIONS

　　① One third of the world"s people don"t have enough clean water.

　　② More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.

　　③ People are disturbed quite often by kinds of noises.

　　④ Every person in our city makes about 1.8 kilos of rubbish every day.

　　这道看图作文题，主题和图片连接得不是很紧密。从考查的形式上来说，虽是看图，实质上却属于提示性的作文。这个作文应该结合个人的观点，选择的余地还是很大的。做这个题应该注意几个方面：

　　1、认真读题。注意，题目虽然给了四幅图，但是却只要求写其中的两个就行。

　　2、题意要求的是阐述个人的观点-最担忧的两种情形。而不是对图片进行描述。

　　3、结合所给的提示。提示中，对每种污染都进行了阐述，考生可以这些描述进行写作。

　　4、注意字数，语法，拼写等，避免错误。

　　下面是两个例文，大家可以参考一下。

　　范文：观点一

　　The environment is becoming worse and worse. There are many kinds of pollution I worry about. The most serious two are water pollution and air pollution, because people can"t live healthily with dirty water and polluted air, nor can animals. More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.

　　I think factories should not pour dirty water into the river directly or produce more waste gas. We"d better go on foot or by like instead of by car, because more cars mean more waste gas. We should make our world more and more beautiful.

　　范文：观点二

　　The first fact I worry about is noise pollution. People can"t sleep well if there is too much noise. That"s why so many people prefer to live in the countryside rather than live in the noisy city. I suggest all the factories and cars shouldn"t make terrible noises. If they make terrible noise that isn"t allowed, they will be fined, and we can also produce the cars which can"t make terrible noise.

　　The other pollution is rubbish pollution. If everyone makes so much rubbish, one day we may live in a world filled with rubbish. Some people throw the waste paper about. I suggest rubbish should be put into different kinds of dustbins or paper bags.